tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128460350781036829.post2225568865000469824..comments2024-03-26T15:49:44.555+00:00Comments on How To Write Badly Well: Allow your attention to wanderJoel Stickleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14270604410152020281noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128460350781036829.post-24523123361257987682022-05-10T00:37:21.053+01:002022-05-10T00:37:21.053+01:00Then it's 2 pages about the guys who were chas...Then it's 2 pages about the guys who were chasing him and then 3 about the second guy's history of cat ownership.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128460350781036829.post-18101792035883698382011-02-25T05:47:17.046+00:002011-02-25T05:47:17.046+00:00This is so much like Dickens! Except he did it to ...This is so much like Dickens! Except he did it to good effect, hilariously and beautifully.Christynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128460350781036829.post-30578970650991460252010-11-08T00:32:06.741+00:002010-11-08T00:32:06.741+00:00If you narrowed it down to just Two run-on sentenc...If you narrowed it down to just Two run-on sentences it would be Perfect.C.C.Colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14497637880401889686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128460350781036829.post-34654983503757616772010-10-27T20:35:19.104+01:002010-10-27T20:35:19.104+01:00Gag.Gag.Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09827047315895632135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128460350781036829.post-32174323925622840342010-10-27T17:10:33.881+01:002010-10-27T17:10:33.881+01:00It would have been perfect, had there been no ment...It would have been perfect, had there been no mention of Joe after he hid in the doorway.Knowing what happened to him directly, made it bad. Maybe the cop who busted Lee for drugs after catching him with his wife found Joe's dead body while following a dog that had taken a sock from the homeless man. This homeless man was a vet from the first gulf war, the injury to his leg kept him from walking, but he did meet his ex-wife in the hospital.Richardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388059354005428379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128460350781036829.post-28115133988455680882010-10-27T15:27:39.032+01:002010-10-27T15:27:39.032+01:00Yeah, I love this. Sorry.Yeah, I love this. Sorry.Sylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05925593802209715440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128460350781036829.post-29963549639767036242010-10-27T15:06:52.342+01:002010-10-27T15:06:52.342+01:00I would totally read the rest of this book.I would totally read the rest of this book.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128460350781036829.post-81650241200125204852010-10-27T15:02:07.833+01:002010-10-27T15:02:07.833+01:00I don't know, dude. Do you ever write badly b...I don't know, dude. Do you ever write badly badly? Nope.Judenoreply@blogger.com