Replace concrete nouns with abstract ones

I let my hand rest gently

on your locomotion as you exhaled.

With each breath, I could see your life force

rising

and falling

inside your blouse.

Meanwhile, in my trousers,

my urgency became substance.

I licked my parched half-of-an-uncompleted-kiss;

you slowly blinked your soft blue perceptions.

Finally, we fell into one another’s manipulations of the physical world

and literally made love.