Focus on the wrong details in love poetry




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  1. Loved this. Couldn't think it could get any more hilarious after the frantic crescendo of (rhyming!) angst about her chin, but then you started talking about your children...

    Nailed the delivery. If I wasn't listening too closely I would have thought you were reading a serious love poem.

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  2. I think my favorite line is the first.

    "You look better from behind, big-chinned woman.
    ... You look better from behind."

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  3. Comedy genius as always. Loved the special table with alcoves for chins

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